Right.
OKay. It's apparent you use a tablet for these films. Am I correct? Well.
You seem to have a good talent for drawing, but PLEASE tone down the radiant fills a bit! Not everything has to be shiney :-|
Animation was decent, but was not very.. uhh how do I put this. It was subdued over acting. I mean, I think that you could have a put a little more power into the moves with the sword, and a little less on the " 'tude". I mean, the guy was powerful and all, but he didn't have to go all all... "Mwa ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha" and so on.
If one is TRUELY evil, there will be a subelty in the moves that the less powerful good characters do not posses. If you are going to make them seem powerful, they shouldn't be all "Rggghhh....Grrrraawwuggh. Must.... muster..... strength!!!" No. THe moves need to be more sudden. I know it's hard ( god look at my flashes and find out ) but I think you can manage it.
The voice acting. Where do I begin... First of all. The lip synching was a bit below par, and uhh the whole "One in many" voices... is getting O-L-D. Why the heck don't you have any female characters btw? Look. I can hook you up with my brother who is a PHENOMENAL voice actor ( not professional... YET. ) Check out FLASHvic's movies to see what I mean.
Anyway, sorry if you think I am bashing you, but I'm not e_e;:
Fairly good job, but not much of an improvment scince your first movie.
-GKG