Sorry for being a bother before.
But I must say...you play beautifully. That is one characteristic of you that someone special will definitely notice...if that person hasn't noticed it already.
Submitting your song to the NG Audio Portal wouldn't be such a bad idea.
jobbob1
Great song, i didnt notice any mistakes (but then again i play guitar, and dont read music. so i might not be as sensitive to it as you are). the picture is funny too