Age/Gender: 18, Female
Location: San Antonio, TX
Job: Flash animatior, etc
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Latest Flash Reviews
"Finally, something that deserves first place."
What blew me away, out of many things from this flash, were the particle, and attack effects. You certainly have an eye for it, and integrated it with the rest of the style perfectly.
Story was quite different. Which is refreshing. Hard to come across things that have more than a rudimentary idea of "Original content" on this website anymore. That ALONE deserves 10 stars.
I would really like to see a tutorial from you, how to do some of the effects presented, unless you want to keep that thing a secret. Either way, your choice.
Keep it up. Don't stop believing in your work!
-GKG
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You draw faces very well, and the hair was quite nicely shaded, but your grasp of proportions is way off. Spend a little bit more time perhaps fine-tuning your skills and anatomy.
There's one thing to want to draw in an anime style, but you have to be able to pull of more than just the neck up to make a series.
It's crucial.
I used to be terrible at drawing bodies, but I practiced and practiced and now... well I've still got work to do, but I'm getting there.
Another plus was the voices. Good casting, quite professional.
Don't rush yourself, this seems like a good series, and I look forward to your improvement-
-GKG
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But it seems you got really lazy with a lot of it. Three weeks is a tight budget, I understand, but why limit yourself like that when you're trying such a big project.
Still pictures can convey a lot when animation time is limited, but why not expend a little effort into those, rather than just succumbing to laziness? A good dramatic still can speak volumes.
I'm not going to comment on the music, because anyone can find music.
Timing was... Okay.
But scribbling out stuff really makes a bad impression when you're trying to promote your original characters, and your favorite characters.
Good luck next time.
-GKG
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Latest Audio Reviews
But I must agree with the others on the part of the guitar.
It did sound extremely artificial, and overpowered the rest of the track.
Otherwise, a wonderfully constructed piece of music.
Kudos.
-GKG
Author's Response:
I explained the guitar things in the last few responses, although I'll say again I do agree it sounds (too) artificial, although it was never my intent to make it sound real. :P
I'm glad you liked it, though! :D
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Nyaaaaaa
Why must you own me at making music? Damn you. DAMN YOU!
grr... *goes off to learn finale* = ^=
-GKG
Author's Response:
Because it's part of my job, I have a few years on you, and I have professional software. Don't feel bad, I can't even play an insturment. You probably have more of a gift for music than I do, I just have the equipment.
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I think the complexity of it was beautiful. You use Audacity eh? I use that too. Not the best for piano recordings. I've given up on ever getting a song into ng because of god damned Audacity. *grumbles*
Anyway. Good tempo, and nice changing things around the :30 area to keep the listener interested, but how you come out if it is rather awkward. I thought it was just repeating again until around 1:07. Anyway. nice job.
-GKG
Author's Response:
Thank you very much
Clayton
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